First comes the praise - I really enjoy the textures, and there are more than a few interesting patterns in there so it's a pleasure to just look around the image. It's not just a textural fractal either, I really love the composition and the flow - it just works.
There's room for improvement though. I would definitely experiment with different, more grungy palettes. At least some desaturation and increased contrast would make the colours much better for me - especially with that title. The current look suggests summer festivities to me.
Another personal suggestion would be to use a better aspect ratio for the frame. A wider frame that cuts off the height to perhaps around 1000px would be much easier on the eyes. I really have a personal issue with 4:3 aspect ratio so i may be biased here, but The Golden Ratio is a thing
There's room for improvement though. I would definitely experiment with different, more grungy palettes. At least some desaturation and increased contrast would make the colours much better for me - especially with that title. The current look suggests summer festivities to me.
Another personal suggestion would be to use a better aspect ratio for the frame. A wider frame that cuts off the height to perhaps around 1000px would be much easier on the eyes. I really have a personal issue with 4:3 aspect ratio so i may be biased here, but The Golden Ratio is a thing
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