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September 1, 2011
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:iconesintu:
First comes the praise - I really enjoy the textures, and there are more than a few interesting patterns in there so it's a pleasure to just look around the image. It's not just a textural fractal either, I really love the composition and the flow - it just works.

There's room for improvement though. I would definitely experiment with different, more grungy palettes. At least some desaturation and increased contrast would make the colours much better for me - especially with that title. The current look suggests summer festivities to me.

Another personal suggestion would be to use a better aspect ratio for the frame. A wider frame that cuts off the height to perhaps around 1000px would be much easier on the eyes. I really have a personal issue with 4:3 aspect ratio so i may be biased here, but The Golden Ratio is a thing ;)
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:iconcoby01:
wonderful colors and textures :clap:
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:iconcoffeetoffeesquirrel:
=CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Sep 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thanks:love:
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:iconblurwing:
Fall is blowin' in and we can't stop it...
Beautiful image!!!
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:iconcoffeetoffeesquirrel:
=CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Sep 2, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thanks:love:
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:iconoutsidefate:
~OutsideFate Sep 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Ohgod! Those colours are gorgeous!
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:iconcoffeetoffeesquirrel:
=CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Sep 1, 2011  Professional General Artist
:bow: thanks! sometimes you find a golden ore with the random gradient button:la:
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:iconoutsidefate:
~OutsideFate Sep 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I do that quite often (my entire gallery)
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:iconcoffeetoffeesquirrel:
=CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Sep 1, 2011  Professional General Artist
mine too!!! :highfive: but some are from the apo gradients I got from Leichenengel...useful stuff:love:
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~OutsideFate Sep 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Apo gradients never worked for me.
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:iconcoffeetoffeesquirrel:
=CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Sep 1, 2011  Professional General Artist
oh? they're useful if you set the colour density to a place between 0.1-0.5 and the transfer function to linear. works like a charm:meow:
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