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Gribouille by CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Gribouille by CoffeeToffeeSquirrel
My tweak of *timemit's fractal in :iconfractalcircles: UF circle 15.
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Hello,
Phase unreal mixture of geometric shape.
The colors are well chosen and very well coordinated.
Very good choice.
Or rather I love, I love the different textures for this drawing.
The bar on the right side makes sense, a stop for the eye.
We could ask a different direction to see the end of the drawing down.
Mix of pale pink with its colors, is very well balanced.
It was really a feeling of depth in the eye and the third dimension.
Texture, a feeling of "scratching" the layers of the two colors on the bottom of the drawing.
The articulation of rosasses is perfect and the color is appropriate.
A small note on the petal to the right, I think it's a little too oversized, because it does not match the dimensions of the other petals.
May be a small adjustment to do about it, or else an element of surprise, which may take effect with the vertical bar on the right.
I think we should expand a bit more in terms of the fractal.
But the detail is a good idea anyway.
Thank you to seek a review on this fractal.
It always helps designers of fractals, to have a fresh look and a different perspective on the work of others.
Thank you again for this great work.
See you soon.
No, I do not speak English.
So the translation can be misinterpreted, I apologize in advance.
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Bonjour,
Phase irréelle, mélange de forme géométrique.
Les couleurs sont bien choisies et très bien coordonnées.
Très bon choix.
J’aime ou plutôt, j’adore les textures différentes pour ce dessin.
La barre sur le coté droit donne un sens, un arrêt pour le regard.
On pourrait demander une orientation différente, afin de voir la fin du dessin vers le bas.
Mélanger de la rose pale avec ses couleurs, est très bien dosé.
On a vraiment une sensation de profondeur dans le regard et de la troisième dimension.
La texture, une sensation de « gratter » les couches superposées des deux couleurs sur le fond du dessin.
L’articulation des rosasses est parfaite et la couleur est judicieuse.
Une petite remarque sur le pétale de droite, je pense qu’elle est un peu trop surdimensionnée, car elle ne correspond pas avec les dimensions des autres pétales.
Peut être un petit réglage à faire a ce propos, ou alors, un effet de surprise, qui peut prendre son effet avec la barre verticale de droite.
Je pense qu’il faudrait élargir un peu plus le plan de cette fractale.
Mais le détail est judicieux quand même.
Je te remercie de demander une critique pour cette fractale.
Cela aide toujours les concepteurs de fractales, d’avoir un œil nouveau et un autre regard sur le travail des autres.
Merci encore pour ce beau travail.
A bientôt.
Attention, je ne parle pas anglais.
Donc la traduction peut être mal interprétée, et je m’en excuse par avance.
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:iconmindpoet61:
The first thing that strikes me about this particular fractal is the tasteful and well-coordinated use of color to help define this shape. Your consistent use of various shades of beige strikes me as particularly sophisticated and professional and the well-placed streaks of soft pink add a subtly sensuous touch to this piece. I like the addition of the vertical bar on the right; it adds an element of interest to the whole.
The only changes I would make are to nudge the image about 10 pixels to the left and maybe 15 to 20 pixels up. Altogether a richly compelling image!
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DreamsCatchMe Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Well done.
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CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
Thanks:)
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Sprucetail Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
cool design
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CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
Thanks:aww:
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mlr2010 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
very good work :rose:
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CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012   General Artist
thanks:aww:
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VCRetouching Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I love fractals nice job!!
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CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012   General Artist
thanks:aww:
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gemlovesyou Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lovely work, I love the patterns and the colours, it's got a vintage look to it.
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CoffeeToffeeSquirrel Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012   General Artist
:aww: thanks! vintage look is excactly what I aimed for, so your comment made me happy:hug:
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